Little Marie has lost her sheep, and can't know where to find them...or can she?

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March 7th, 2007, 12:54 am

FEEDBACK PLEASE!

I DESPERATELY NEED SOME FEEDBACK CONCERNING SPEED, PACE, and FLOW!!!

When I read it myself, I can't quite tell if the comic is going smoothly and if its making enough sense...

Please do comment on whether it is comprehensible? Making sense? Flowing well? Too much text? Adequately detailed?

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS GREATLY APPRECIATED!!!!!

Comments:

Jess, March 8th, 2007, 4:19 am

So far this comic is really great. It flows nicely and I understand it. I love the amount of detail you put into it and no it's not too much text. I like the story so far too ^^

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